Lindsay_P

I am very much enjoying this story. it is an interesting twist on the transmigration trope. I went ahead and bought all the chapters! the only thing I'm confused about is there seems to be a chapter missing between 15 and 16? the storyline completely jumped. I'm a bit confused.

the story is really good, as are the drawings. I went through 5 chapters in no time at all, and cannot wait to read more. the only complaint I have is that the dialogue is a bit clunky. Hopefully it gets better the farther we get into the story

I'm a true crime junkie. I do a lot of reading.

only if you manage to open the jugular. it would take multiple passes with a knife to kill someone by slitting their throats, which would make for a slow and painful death.

it seems like an interesting story, but I just can't get past all the editing errors. it makes it difficult to concentrate on the story. ....

talk about unnecessary violence; what was the point of slitting her throat? if she's completely unable to move, it would've been easier to suffocate her with a pillow...

this story is a solid idea, however I felt the constant shift between 2nd and 3rd person to be extremely annoying. could definitely do with some reworking.

anyone else find the switch between 2nd and 3rd person annoying?