Aldrighi

Worst point in time to ever start a fic. Ew.

How many times did this happen in a dozen chapters?

I don't understand making a MC that will never lose.

"Into the fires of battle, unto the Anvil of War!"

Are wolverines a thing in this world?

C makes no sense on the account of who she is. Whoever is asking for C is an immature child who knows nothing about how life works.

This one, and imo he should stop making her think he wants her.

Get well, focus on your health and when you're bored read some novels, movies, videos, books, etc. I recommend Horizon of War, Matabar, Mage Tank, Return of the Runebound Professor, That Time an American was Reincarnated into Another World, Hoard, A Soldier's Life, Blue Star Enterprises, Battle Through the Nine Realms,Sublight Drive (Star Wars), all from rr.