Danny3636
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Danny36366mthrespondió a Thunderstrike2024As for the Basic Survival Guide, it's a document containing tips and tricks on how to survive the apocalypse retrieved from the internet. This is convenient because he doesn't have to access the internet, which will be gone soon.- Danny36366mthComentado por
What about his sister? Shouldn’t that be his priority at the moment?
"Of course sir, we can clean," the soldier replied. "Do you have any cleaning equipment we can use?" - Danny36369mthComentado porJiryoku's voice remained flat and emotionless as he spoke his words of warning to the Chunin, "If you had harbored any hostile intentions towards me, I would have swiftly separated your head from your body." He then calmly withdrew his sword from the startled Chunin's neck and proceeded to ask, "Now, tell me, what is your purpose for coming here?"
- Danny36361yrComentado por
This whole chapter felt like a draft, it reads like speaker notes
He was sucked inside, saying goodbye to his imaginary family that waited for him somewhere. When he collided with the crystals, he simply vanished. He could hear women calling out in the dark. They all felt so real, unlike the stories he made inside his mind. - Danny36361yrComentado por
Doesn’t the twinkling mean he’s mind reading them?
Finally, the Headmaster arrived and took a seat at the head of the table, his twinkling blue eyes surveying the group of professors assembled before him. - Danny36361yrComentado por"You know what? I have two tickets to a magic show happening tonight. What do you say we go after dinner?" She proposed, pulling out two tickets from her pocket.
- Danny36361yrComentado por"Who indeed? Mimic has the power of the Clone Clone Fruit. He can change into a perfect replica of other people. What's crazy is that he can use their strength too. One of the strongest Marines is a guy named Garp. Mimic can turn into Garp and become way stronger than any of us Players. When he changes, he can't use that person's Devil Fruit or special abilities, but he can use their full physical strength. I hear he is trying to copy the physique of some of the strongest pirates in the world right now. As for Goddess of Ice, she has the Chilly Chilly Fruit power and uses a Sword. She and Wonder Woman bicker all the time in the Pirate Chat."
- Danny36361yrComentado porI swear to God, despite looking like she was just casually walking, her speed was like she's running at least 15 kph per second, how was that even possible?!
- Danny36361yrPublicado por
It’s a pretty good story and worth reading despite some of the issues it has. There are small spelling and grammar errors here and there but it’s not that bad, the story development is pretty good, although it’s really rushed in some areas. There are a lot of important or interesting events are that get completely skipped over with only a sentence or a paragaph mentioning what happened. An example would be the birthday party he had, it would have been really interesting to read about that and how all the characters would interact with each other but it gets completely skipped over.
- Danny36361yrComentado porBefore she could finish her sentence, someone beside her spoke, not to mention that voice sounds very familiar. "Oh, you're finally awake, that's good."
- Danny36361yrrespondió a ThreshGasm
Getting too mad over fictional characters bro
I don't know when Lorelei and Shirou started dating, but I suppose it was a year or two after that rejection incident. - Danny36361yrComentado porThankfully though, I could understand his words, since it's spoken in English, still that accent though. It's British.
- Danny36361yrComentado porHe found this crystal cave because he fell inside by accident, the tapping trick with a stick wasn't enough, he thought there wasn't empty air below him and he walked over, gravity doing the rest. Good thing that falling into the equivalent of a two-story building was barely an inconvenience, outside of a dislocated shoulder that was immediately put back in place.
- Danny36361yrrespondió a Winter_Whisperer
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All female crew you say?
The biggest and noisiest problems were from the Wonder Pirates and Bomb Pirates. Both had strong crews and have given the Marines a Bloody nose. Wonder Woman, the captain of the all-female Wonder Pirates, had a bounty of 83 Million at the moment, but it would probably rise with her string of victories. Dyna Might, captain of the Bomb Pirates, already had a bounty of 105 Million berries, but that was not so much due to his strength as the amount of damage he caused. - Danny36361yrComentado porRayleigh shook his head. It wasn't the Marines, Pirates, or World Government that truly ruled this world. It was Capitalism.
- Danny36361yrrespondió a Omori101Pitou's instincts flared as time seemed to slow down. Particles of dust passed slowly in front of her through her awareness as she lifted her head to identify the threat. She was just in time to notice cracks appearing on the ballerina construct above her. A flash of light spread out from her Nen ability as it shattered and a heavy purple glow replaced it and got closer and closer. The moment before her death seemed to extend for eternity as she noticed the purple glow reach her head. Layer by layer, her face and flesh dissolved as the purple aura of pure destruction descended upon her.
- Danny36361yrrespondió a Super_Killer_Mob16Right after a creature landed next to him, red in color, headless with a praying mantis posture, its two hooked front limbs waving in the air as it silently and gracefully walked with its four clawed feet toward the squealing thing embedded in his chest.
- Danny36361yrrespondió a The_Bip_Boop2003
Oh nah
At this point the ground had more roots than ground, it was a mess of roots of all sizes entwined together. Living in between were the rare sleeping stingbats, strange spider space huggers look alike, three meters long (9ft8) centipede, strange vertebrates similar to geckos if human-sized, various flying insects and jellyfish-like creatures such as a deep purple sphere with tentacles and four leaves shaped 'wings' to float on about the hot air current coming from under.