Divine_univers

guy really is making someone else participate in the duel, it almost feels like Baron Nathan is trying to let the relationship between their houses deteriorate

story suffers from a lack of flow, it's very event to event based, and it's hard to read at certain points do to sentence structure not being the best. fights can be hard to imagine and as stated above with the event to event based reading it feels like details are left out at certain points. still think its worth reading it's just rough

part of the reason I stopped reading it, there's a difference between inspiration and quite literally feeling like a copy and paste with very minute differences

i check out damn near anything so probably

yeah but the whole story hasn't even taken a month yet 😭 if I didn't know better id say he had his awakening 2 days ago and now he's all knowing all powerful this quick

how much time has passed since his awakening cause I actually have 0 clue

wow this chapter was extremely Short

i like the story but man can we get some sort of slow down, like it's been like 10 fights in the span of 24 hours at least that's how the story makes it seem

pretty good so far, i like the fact that the R-18 portion of the book doesn't completely take over and the story flows well. way better then I was expecting

let's go minor setback for a major comeback