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this is a bowl of incense on a chain

since the Stalker can teleport to any dimension and anywhere in the world, it would be interesting to see the chapter where he and Ryuto pass through the worlds and finally arrive in the Warframe universe. and kill Stalker where it all began would be symbolic (I used a translator, there may be inaccuracies in the translation)

what version of the warframe the protagonist has. And if it is updated there is a chance to see new warframes, railjacks, necromechs, etc.

it would be great if the main character's voice changed depending on the warframe.Nekros would speak with the voice of Warcraft undead

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Well, one chapter is not worth judging about the entire work. What about the female character? I think it's a bit like a Korean woman's reincarnation (21st century killers, doctor, herbalist, etc.) I'm not saying it's bad, it's just like each other. If I understand correctly, she will have an ability that will be related to technique. Regarding the plot, I will say that the beginning is not bad, but I would add more chapters 2-3 for a complete understanding of what is happening in the world, about the main character, his relationship, etc. (I used a google translator to write the commentary and read the chapter so there may be inaccuracies)

мы моем включить туда кюри и у нас будет уже межрасовый гарем

It said that she could revive him once a month if I remember correctly

This is certainly not the best picture, but if you look closely, you can see the attached revolver on the forearm (I know that they are called regulators, but it's more convenient for me)

Afton will be able to make a biomechanical or cybernetic arm with his knowledge in medicine and science (like the arm of the Winter Soldier or a prosthetic Fullmetal Alchemist, but capable of modifying or having a retractable weapon like the revolvers of Misa Prime from Warframe), then this is not so bad.For example, this arm is from Deus Ex and would be classified as an energy weapon.

Great author, keep writing this story. This is the first time I see someone crossing Lovecraft (this is a reference to Nyaratotep) and Harry Potter. I ask for the continuation of this story. I can't say anything about spelling, since I read with a translator.