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just when the story is getting interesting it's locked...

now she dies I can't wait for her to rise

this story pulled on all my heart strings overwhelming me with emotions that I had to stop reading at one point to catch my breath. I felt every pain tried hard not to cry every tears.

I might have shot him... not by mistake... then regret

you don't deserve her

Damn, this is intense. was my first thought when I read the first line of the opening chapter. I know I saw the title of the book but I needed expect that. day dreaming... Really amazing story seeing from a man point of view. It didn't take much for the author to capture your attention with the first chapter and not because it was hot. From the beginning the author kept you guessing and because you're curious you kept reading and reading if you read this story you'll never sstop.

Needs alot of work but overall the story is progressing and slowly developing. some character's thoughts are a little jumbled. Needs proofreading and the structure is a little rocky. But it's a great story so far... thank you for sharing

really plays on your emotions.i don't know if she escaped from horror to a greater horror. it's really really captivating story. keep writing I love it thank you for sharing and I recommend to other readers to get engaged into this story you won't be disappointed.

😭how could you write such a heartbreaking story. The girl is so naive and they just took advantage of her. I thought whatever is name is will be her light and happy ever after but he turns into a monster and hits her the same I wish I was her friend so I could at least tear the husband apart. Apart from all the suffering that she's going through it's a great story because no matter how it made me cry I kept reading. thank you for sharing

please read. this story is truly amazing with vampires and witches and dragons. I've always loved reading fantasy and here I am getting my full in this book. it's really amazing and I'll ask you to read and recommend to crazy fantasy readers like yourself.