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Miya_Tango

Miya_Tango

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2020-12-10 Se unióGlobal
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    Miya_Tango2yr
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    Ch 1 Valentines
    Valentines
    Ciudad · Jo_J
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  • Miya_Tango
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    I haven't read all the chapters, but I can already see some influence of the books written by Crichton (mutations, evolution), Ludlum (conspiracy, etc.), or Brown (action location). If you add some aviation or vintage cars thread I would be able to add Cussler :D Great job, man!

    Story has been re-uploaded: "Gene Era: Breath of Evolution"
    Fantasía · YoanRoturier
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    Wow! You have a great imagination, man (or woman)! You nicely create the world you write about. The plot is interesting. The story is a good read!

    Ravens of Eternity
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  • Miya_Tango
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    Great introduction!

    Ch 1 Awake
    Amara - Reunion
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    Great chap, but still waiting for more.

    Ch 4 Preparations (Part - 1)
    (Hiatus) The Augmented War
    Ciencia y ficción · Supernova_
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    The synopsis is written well. You expect to read a reall masterpiece, but... Boom! Not a genre I would normally read. Objectively speaking, the story line is interesting, but there is something missing. I wonder myself what is it? Some kind of lack the lightness? There are places that I feel the text is a bit artificial, even kinda plastic. So definietly there is a place to improve.

    A SONG OF WRATH
    Fantasía · Dvanzy6
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    Only three chapters, so its difficult to judge the contents. So far the storyline is interesting. I think you have an original style of writing, you build sentences with attention to words. Good work!

    (Hiatus) The Augmented War
    Ciencia y ficción · Supernova_
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    Thanks to Marvel's production, Scandinavian mythology is experiencing a real renaissance recently. The figure of Thor, the god of thunder, who is worthy to pick up the hammer of Mjölnir, appeared in comics a long time ago, in the early 1960s (BTW great books). Together with Thor, the comics and films adapted the rest of the Scandinavian pantheon, led by Odin and Loki. Marvel draws handfuls from Nordic beliefs, often simplifying them and adapting them to modern plot patterns, but the world of Asgard is built skillfully and consistently. The Scandinavian mythology is now reached by many authors and their books are very popular. So it is a well-chosen topic.

    (Hiatus) Ragnarök: The Fimbulwinter Saga
    Fantasía · YoanRoturier
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    Autor, please be note, that we use 'scandinavian mitology' instead of 'nordic'

    Ch 1 Fimbulwinter
    (Hiatus) Ragnarök: The Fimbulwinter Saga
    Fantasía · YoanRoturier
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    the same

    He wondered what his car was doing in front of the garage? Had he taken a taxi? Michael rarely used that means of transportation.
    Anemones
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    Michael

    On the way home, Alex decided to check in on Michael, who had left work earlier. He did not know the reason why he left the editorial office. He only knew that he was in a very hurry to rush somewhere.
    Anemones
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    Worth following behaviour!

    Zoey pursed her lips and took a deep breath. "There's a cafe nearby. Do you want to have some tea?" 
    Wild Young Miss: Mister, Let's Kiss!
    Ciudad · BAJJ
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    I love the new cover page. Who did it? You? Is Alice sitting at the wheel? Great story, written with humor, sarcasm and irony. Love the attention to details!

    Anemones
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  • Miya_Tango
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    good chap!

    Ch 23 The First Step (part 2)
    Return of the Woodcutter
    Fantasía · YoanRoturier
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    a poor girl

    Even his friends and acquaintances made her understand that he was accompanied by persona non grata in their social circle. They believed that she was with him only because of his professional and social position.
    Anemones
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    surprising turn of events

    "Enzo…" Zoey muttered under her breath, watching everything unfold before her eyes.
    Wild Young Miss: Mister, Let's Kiss!
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    ???

    “I have no idea.” Matthew responded stoically, trying at all costs to be serious. ‘To the best place to get her revenge.’ He added in his mind.
    The bet
    Ciudad · Jo_J
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  • Miya_Tango
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    almost I can feel the scent :D

    He remembered, with sentiment, the time when he and the adults were sitting late in the living room by the fireplace, around the charming scent of Christmas tree, mixed with the scent of burnt sandalwood, which his grandfather would add to the fire to, as he said, warm up the mood and unusual atmosphere of these special days.
    Anemones
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    a piece of history

    Grandpa decided it was time for him to take flight lessons. He would put his grandson in the front seat of the Sterman C3 - his favorite biplane, strapped it on, sat at the controls himself and they flew for hours, spending amazing moments in the air.
    Anemones
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    Great idea! some power stones from me

    Ch 4 Jack (part 1)
    Return of the Woodcutter
    Fantasía · YoanRoturier
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