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AnaRose

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2020-12-06 Se unióGlobal
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose2yr
    Publicado por

    This book definitely lives uptown its genre. The descriptions are very good and isn't too complicated in case of readers who don't have a vast vocabulary. I like how the FL is sure of her feelings and acts on that and doesn't budge. This will make the reader want to know how the relationship changes over time. I even liked how when Melody crossed the line when her emotions clouded her, it wasn't just looked over. It was acknowledged as a bad part on her side as a doctor. The story moves pretty fast with things happening with quick pace. I think more narration of the main character's feelings or inner thoughts would be nice! I liked how you correctly explained the honorifics system and used many phrases with reference to the culture you're basing your characters on! Overall a very fun book! Keep up!

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    Your Needle and Thread
    Adolescente · Lynnifer Ice
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a bloodaxe

    haha

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    Lost in the 1st Millenium AD
    Fantasía · Ritankar_Sarkar_
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    Very interesting story! The writing is very nice to read and the plot is also super interesting. I'm excited for potential romances and readers will be hooked! Good luck[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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    Runaway Queen
    LGBT+ · Maggie_Sawyer_Cop
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    Really liked this story😊 The writing might have had minor errors but that's totally okay and you can definitely improve. The synopsis and first chapter is very interesting and readers will be hooked. good luck author!!!

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    THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS
    Fantasía · Zane_Earth
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Lynnifer_Ice

    Oh my god I'm really falling behind on the editing aspect it's really passing over my head will fix it

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    Honestly speaking, your writing is very mature and detailed. I was very impressed with each description and dialogue it was so good. The mystery element is good!![img=recommend] Just when I thought A was the one, something makes me feel otherwise but I'm wrong again and it's a cycle that's interesting. I'm overall very impressed with how mature your writing and story flow is!! Good luck t.h

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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    A really interesting book for sure! I love the author of the book LOL it brings a really lighthearted feeling to the story and I really loved it. I immediately knew I would end up simping for Jihoon haha. Good luck author keep it up😊[img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

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    [BL] Transmigrated Into The Book(Omegaverse)
    LGBT+ · yohan26_
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a neooo_

    LOL

    AUTHOR: By the way, my book was an omegaverse
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    [BL] Transmigrated Into The Book(Omegaverse)
    LGBT+ · yohan26_
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a yohan26_

    Thank u❤️

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Lynnifer_Ice

    Ah ok I think I corrected that bit thank you

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Lynnifer_Ice

    Ohh not even when it's a dialogue?

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    It's a really interesting and capturing plot. I love how the first chapter is very emotion driven and is filled with angst which is really fun! I noticed a few error in tenses but as a fellow author I get it lol, we make mistakes. Overall it's very interesting good luck![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Five Years Back In Time
    Fantasía · surprisinglypretty
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a surprisinglypretty

    Thank u so much❤️

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Mel_Aniv

    thanks[img=recommend]

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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasía · Mel_Aniv
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    Publicado por

    I really love this book! The synopsis is very capturing and writing style is very good! Readers wont be disappointed by this and the hype is well deserved! Good work author!

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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasía · Mel_Aniv
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Mel_Aniv

    thank u sm🥺🥺

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Heart59

    ah sure😊

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Heart59

    🥺🥺aww thank uuu❤️

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Lynnifer_Ice

    really?🥺 thank u sm for supporting

    Ch 10 "Miraeth"
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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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  • AnaRose
    AnaRose3yr
    respondió a Lynnifer_Ice

    thank you I have edited all your corrections!😊

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    FALLEN: HER TEMPTATION
    Fantasía · AnaRose
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