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Prob one of the coolest worlds I've made. If you like steampunk or advanced technology this is a book for you. MC is interesting and cold with a mysterious backstory :3. Magic system is hella unique imo. If you have any ideas to add to the book, just drop a comment and I'll probably incorporate it. Makes it easier to generate ideas :D and also incorporate things you all like. Ofc, if the idea doesn't line up with the 35-page spread of the world and its system that I made, it prob won't be incorporated. Anyways, enjoy!

Pretty good........................................................................................... ...............................................

It's pretty good. The beginning had me on the edge of my seat so I'm looking forward to the future of this novel. Also, hope there is no romance cause I'm not a big fan of it

then what is the point of the story if he wasn't reborn

Honestly, I didn't have high expectations after the first half of the first volume as it kinda seemed like an EoC copy and the pacing, grammar, and kingdom building were wack, but after you introduced the planes, I became really invested. I can see why you included that it differs later on from EoC in the description. Writing quality has gotten much better as of the later chapters, story development is getting somewhere after the hints you placed in the second volume, and the world background is probably the most interesting to me. It seems like a cool concept that differs from realms or worlds. But, it's still basically a tower, kind of. Well, I'm just excited for what's to come and hope you don't screw up and I hope you learned from the first volume's mistakes.