the harem genre is a very deep plague.. Hello
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From the beginning, I found the whole fusion thing to find a partner strange. Besides, in essence, it's about deceiving husbands but with extra steps. It’s more logical and less complicated to set him up on a date with a relative than to go through the whole fusion mess. Lastly, there’s the issue of Vegito’s emotional sensitivity. It’s human and not Saiyan at all. He might have Saiyan memories, but not their nature. At his core, he’s more human than a Saiyan warrior/idiot, and that can be good or bad depending on what you’re trying to achieve. I’d lean more toward an arrogant approach rather than a compassionate one when narrating Vegito. He seems too soft for someone who’s the fusion of two Saiyan geniuses... I’ll set aside the human part because that’s where the softness comes from. Joking aside, a slightly arrogant and haughty narrative is what Vegito needs because, honestly, he comes off more like a monk than anything else.
Sinceramente mucha información... No es nada divertido. Qué fue en su vida anterior, un tiktoker de DM y Marvel?
You know, when I read the MC's lines to Todoroki I imagined Dr. House in tone... and I don't think watching his series has anything to do with that, at all. Anyway, just wanted to comment on that. I found it endearing.
Por cierto, soy solo siendo un idiota. No tomen en serio mis comentarios. Es una buena historia
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No, se porque me siento tan troll. No he dormido nada. Debe de ser por ello, lamento si soy tan pesado pero... Tanta culpa puede tener una persona? Qué es él, un santo?
Mucho monólogo de culpa... Ni que fuera dios.
Sabes, las misiones son horrendas, no puede simplemente ser un sistema de plásmidos y ya?
Spiderman levanta toneladas y se queja por solo 30 Kg ...
Lo que note en la escritura es que tiene mucho información... Eso es bastante irritable en el tiempo, además, mucha explicación que si bien es "interesante" no me genera un interés real en detenerme y leerlo. Dicho esto, si el traductor algún día decidiera crear una historia trate de mantener esto en mínimo.