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Wake up to reality. Nothing ever goes as planned in this world. The longer you live, the more you realize that in this reality, only pain, suffering and futility exist.
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You don't use "and more " in a story. For a better reading experience for readers, try to show what the characters are seeing.
Oh my god..
Willingly huh... 😒
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That's the only way to explain her unrealistic actions.
Bullshit.
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Okay, the "a bit" thing is getting quite annoying.
Be confident in what you say mate. Don't try to justify your answers by saying that's what someone else says. 'He/she says' holds no ground. But yes, this is correct.
Did you fix it though?
How does the last sentence make any sense? "I thought you were a pervert who doesn't like women." ...What? She's a pervert because she doesn't like women? How is this sensable.
He didn't. He had no reason to cripple his village. Or maybe he did I don't know as I understand Danzo's reasons more.
It's not that it's hard per se. It's more of whether or not you can be logical. If you can't then don't bother trying writing an intelligent character.
Not 72 hours?