great can't wait for the chapter

yes totally agree with that

I found the protagonist's acknowledgment of their limitations to be refreshing and realistic, adding depth to their character. However, I was hoping for more assertiveness and backbone from them, as their obedience to every order felt somewhat one-dimensional. Despite this, the narrative holds promise, especially with the potential consequences the clan faces when boundaries are pushed too far. With a bit more character development and exploration of the consequences within the clan, this story has the potential to be truly gripping and immersive.

+1

I just finished the latest chapter, and I have to admit, I'm feeling pretty torn up about the main character losing their sight. It hit me hard and made it difficult to stay as invested in the fanfic. While I understand that the story isn't following the typical path of an overpowered protagonist, it's still tough to see them face such a challenging setback. Despite this, I'm holding onto hope that they'll find a way to regain their sight. Thank you for the chapter; I'm eagerly anticipating what's to come, but also feeling a mix of emotions right now.

I like how the story is going but i Just hate how weak Ed is shown I don't think ed Should be this weak

good luck for the test

great story has good potential I don't know how it's going to be waiting for future chapters .

I think this story and character have potential just need to make changes you need to properly outline the story from the story start .There is creativity i believe you can make this a great story but for now the story needs some work .

I also believe the mc can be guardian of humanity as he is resistant to all supernatural power such as curse,mind control and seal .Mc is equivalent of nuclear bomb but capable of destroying universe so supernatural people will have listen to the mc even if they don't want to .mc can be the leader of humanity even if he doesn't have the power to dominate

as long as imagine breaker touches the object it will revert to normal or break

great chapter can't wait for the next chapter.The character and story development is going awesome.

bro marry her she sounds like a keeper dont't let her leave.Dont feel so down about yourself.I don't about field of study but if you are interested in IT field want to make some career in Web and Android Development I can help you out if you are willing to spend 8 months it can lower depends upon grasping power with me and consistently.I Can get you job ready for front and backend dev with minimum 5-10 lpa

yeah NP take care of yourself

love this fic can't wait for the future chapter

great read waiting for more chapters I see the potential some novel start out good but make the boring ending

thanks 👍

I like how you are showing the devil in dxd that they are more than human and not human.But I don't like the cheats you have given to OC(rias) she has the essence of evolution which means she will never lose any fight and grow stronger with every fight and become the strongest being there is no suspense left for me.Try to do something this issue

I like the story of how the OC and Simba react to each death moment and the character development was superb but Author be ready if Simba is killed.

you can search it in web novel check I don't know