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The story is good so far... If it had been me, I would've made Sasuke place a subtle EMS brainwash on orochimaru to goad hiruzen into admitted all his crimes against Naruto and Sasuke during the fight... Not knowing that the battle area was rigged with 'projection seals' that informed not just the whole village but also other guest and ninjas how low konoha had fallen... It will be the biggest blow to the whole of konoha.. even better, he admits it in front of his Edo tensei'd hokages
It's going great so far... A very original and enticing plot that got me hooked... MC taking over sakura's place was godsent because I never liked her... The gender bend is ok
I kinda prefer this plot to the original. Original Yun Che was always going about causing problems with other arrogant young master that he failed to realize he was sometimes act like them. He also relies to much on his borrowed power that he doesn't even try to improve it. Also the way he never really thought much about the women in his life annoyed me...
I'm loving the plot so far... Hope for more chapters[img=coins]
This line was unnecessary for the fanfic. It was already obvious that it was Madara with the previous sentence...