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I loved the first 100-150 chapters of the story but after that point it started becoming more and more obvious that it was translated from Chinese. Like the way the story was written had become more Chinese like for example the MC started saying things like 'open my eyes' or Harry said 'like that Sirius Black' I don't know it's just awkward to read sometimes.
This is the only potter fan-fic that I have managed to read all the way through. Though that is mainly because others have been dropped or the horrible grammar. It was already completed when I started reading and although not the longest fan-fic ever it is one of the best I have read. You can tell that there is character development and there aren't any moments that make me think the MC is an idiot. 11/10 would recommend.