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It was good at first but what bothered me was how everyone seemed to look to the MC to solve their problems. The characters were written as though they didn't know what to do with something and could only turn to the MC for help. It was just annoying because while the MC is smart, he is still a teenage boy and it's unrealistic how much authority and trust he is given right off the bat.
I'm really sorry about that. I kind of just lost a direction for where I wanted the story to go and after leaving it for so long, I lost interest altogether. Maybe one day I'll rewrite it better.
I will leave all my stories here if you want to re-read them.
This novel is super funny. The starting was a little dark for me and some scenes were ones that made you uncomfortable but the comedy and interaction of characters made up for it. Highly recommend to read!!
Honestly author-san, the only problem I have with your story is that girl Kurenai. I really hope she doesn't end up with mc because that'll just suck. I love the plot progress and have no issue with it. Just that one girl I want out of the picture.
Anyone but kurenai
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loving the story but I srsly hate kurenai. she's becoming like sakura and is really annoying.
We already have one Sakura, please don't make Kurenai another one.
I mean...although I hate the guy, he's not wrong.