BossaNovaFlare_1

Could have been blood

No, the context is correct

Not quite, there’s a bit more to it than that 😁

Hey everyone, Autor here. A couple of things to note. A. The MC is an emotionally stunted and unstable character. A large portion of his journey is going to be finding himself. B. Though in 3rd person, this will generally be from the MC’s perspective. Meaning he won’t always realize things right away, and it won’t be disclosed to the reader until he realizes it himself most the time. C. The beginning is kinda a slow burn since he reincarnated as an infant. Figured I’d skip the potty training Arc, but there are things that he is limited to anyways. Overall, thank you for reading. I occasionally take a small haitus since I do work full time and burnout would only diminish the quality of the chapters. Otherwise my goal is 2 chapters a day.

Thank you for your review! I look forward to not disappointing your expectations!

Thank you for your feedback! A couple things I’d like to note. First off, the decision to move his backstory from chapter 1 to the Auxilary was a personal one. Though relevant to his character, I didn’t want to get bogged down in the details. After all, that wasn’t the story I was trying to tell. Second. The decision to leave his parents was long coming. As mentioned, he was being run ragged. No chance of personal time, no chance of social interaction, no chance of family time. Just work work work. When he found out the cause of all that strife was not his benefit like initially assumed, but hope for financial gain, it gave perspective to the last 11 years of his life. So he left trying to escape his miserable situation. (This was already explained in my initial writing) Third. Yes his focus on dying a Virgin was a bit much considering he was DYING. However he was a young man, and that’s what was on his mind before dying. While the story is written in third person, it follows him and his perspective. Once his perspective shifts and he’s given the time to slow down and reflect, I have every intention to let him understand the full implications of everything he’s experienced (This is already hinted at in a few of these early chapters) As for your last criticism, yes it’s very difficult to find a completely original reincarnation work. This novel was written as a fan of the genre wanting to avoid some of it’s more irksome common tropes (Creepy/Edgelord MC, Harem, etc). All in all, thank you for reading my novel, I’d ask you give it a fair chance before deciding it’s unoriginal and lacks depth. I have plans for this story to be well over 1000 chapters, so there’s only so much I can get across in 12. Thank you!

No, as stated, the cure was effective with most forms of cancer. However cancer and AIDS are two very different diseases. One is a mutation in cells causing rampant growth. The other is an Immune system deficiency. In time might he have cured AIDS? Possibly. However he was murdered so that opportunity kinda was taken away from him.

He cured cancer on accident. And whether or not he’s able to or did are two different things

No