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Juan_2032

Juan_2032

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2020-11-07 Se unióIndonesia
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  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    The story is very interested but i think you should have give an explain about mentality of the character . overall this Is a good story' and i can't wait for next chapter

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    Juan_20324 years ago
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    This Is a very great story' and very interested story' . I'm very like it , this story' looks like an Urban legend story' . The character Is very interested and i can't wait for the next chapter

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    This novel has a very great and interested story' and I'm very like about the story' . The character of this novel Is very interested. i can't wait for the next chapter

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    The story' is very good and very interested . I can't wait for the next chapter . The character Is very interested and very great . You are such a good writer

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    I love the story' and very interested with with the story' . The character Is very good and very interested . I can't wait to read the next chapter

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    This Is was a great story' , I'm so interested with the story' and i can't wait for the next chapter . The character Is very good and very interested

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    The story' Is very great and very interesting . Your writing is good and you can make me feel like I'm the character . i can't wait for the next chapter

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    It's a very good story' and I'm so interested to read a new chapter . The background of this story' Is very good too . Your writing quality not bad too

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    Juan_20324 years ago
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    The story' Is very good and the character Is so interesting , I'm waiting for new chapter on it

  • Juan_2032
    Juan_20324 years ago
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    You are a very great writer , your story is very good and very interesting . The cover display is very interesting and the story writing is very soulful