TheUrbanKing

Reread and Rewrite the garbage you spouted. Nothing you wrote made sense nor was it relevant to my comment.

The writing is amazing, but the main character, why is he so passive? It’s frustrating to read. His mother almost kills him. And he’s not angry? Beta cuck simp behavior. While the writing is amazing, there’s nothing that’s hooking me onto the story to keep reading. You go into detail about everything, many of which is pointless. You need to fix your pacing issue. Especially because this is a fanfic, not an original. The only thing I have liked so far is the he(?) part in the beginning. That was really interesting.

The fact that you're also an adult makes this even more embarrassing. You're so full of yourself that you can't even see how pathetic it is to attack someone online just to make yourself feel superior. Money can't buy class, respect, or intelligence—things you clearly lack. If laughing at others' opinions is all you're good for, it's no wonder your only achievement is bragging about your income. Hiding behind empty insults only shows how insecure and shallow you really are. Enjoy your delusions—they're all you have.

It's almost funny how you start by claiming you're not upset or attached, yet proceed to write a mini-essay dripping with bitterness. If you truly didn’t care, you wouldn’t have bothered typing out this pathetic attempt at superiority. As for my reading habits, I actually did read your criticism—I just found it as hollow and irrelevant as your so-called “zero attachment” to fanfics. You talk about valuing original ideas, yet here you are, wasting your time obsessing over someone else's work instead of creating anything meaningful yourself. If you're so detached and uninterested, it's amusing that you'd waste so much time and energy ranting about something you claim to have no attachment to. It seems like you're more invested than you'd like to admit. But I suppose for someone so consumed by hate, it's easier to blame others for your own lack of fulfillment. It's a pity that the only thing you seem to excel at is spewing bitterness and bile. Keep hiding behind your keyboard—it's clear it's the only place you feel powerful. You used my bio to make a comment? Pathetic. Mine was an obvious joke anyone with half a brain could get, but you twisted it into some ironic statement, not realizing you’re exactly the type of person you claim to hate. It’s laughable that you think your disgust affects me. No wonder you’re so supportive of terrible stories with your IQ. I’m only wasting this time to point out how utterly worthless your attempts are, just to ensure you know exactly how insignificant you are. You talk about wasted oxygen, but the real waste is you—miserable, bitter, and utterly irrelevant. Keep hiding behind your screen and seething; it’s all you’ll ever be good for.

It's almost comical that you're this upset over someone dropping a fanfic, but I guess it makes sense. With your limited perspective and juvenile mentality, it's no wonder you cling to anything that doesn't challenge you intellectually. Maybe if you spent less time obsessing over mediocre stories and more time developing an actual sense of discernment, you wouldn't come off as such a petty, bitter fool. But I suppose self-awareness isn't something they cover in 8th grade. It’s ironic for someone who claims they can't stand stupid comments in their bio, you sure have a lot of time to write them. You don’t know better🥹

In the real word, where this is based btw. Not fantasy. We don’t attribute the unexplainable to magic. Nothing is scientifically impossible. We just don’t have enough data to infer. Like how jellyfishes are immortal. Why the worl looks flat. Many things look impossible to explain ya 🤡 Take ur own advice.

whats wrong with seeking help. stupid mc. no, i meant to say stupid author who wrote mc

Pathetic mc and terrible story telling.

yh now i know why this novel isnt ranked. dont try doing anything embarrassing like putting it behind a paywall, cuz then youll lose ur last fans.

i hate these types of characters the most; a talented air head sister. its an easy easy way out of creating character development. like dull innocent mcs. just irritates me. also why is the mc so soft willed. in such an environment, they turn more cruel and apathetic. even as an adult.