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Which part are you referring to?

At some point do you explain why you gave him the training method for free?

An emotional chameleon with a hidden ego": Outwardly he adapts to every environment like a social expert, changing his attitude and speech to fit in with ease. However, behind this skillfully constructed facade, a deep selfishness and a silent belief of superiority is hidden. He does not express it openly, but in solitude or when he feels safe, his true contempt for others and his need for control emerge. His insecurity forces him to disguise himself, and his ability to read and manipulate people makes him a dangerous and fascinating actor. Sorry if you don't understand, I'm not good with English and I used chat to describe how I think your character could be or give you an idea. I love this novel.

A very good novel. If you're looking for it translated into Spanish on the app, I recommend you do so in Google Chrome. You miss a lot of things on the app.

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Very poor adaptation to the Mexica culture, if you are going to call the novel Aztec they should do more research on the culture they are writing about.

I liked the episode, but I found it a bit strange that Ben shows he also has some kind of power so that Emma will accept him or take his supportive words seriously. It feels like, if you don’t have powers, what you think or say about her doesn’t really matter. I feel that, even though Ben tries to be empathetic, he ends up sending a contradictory message. That said, the chapter was good, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing it!

Do you think the story is continuous chapter by chapter, or do you think I get too sidetracked with other topics?

I know it's a story but I don't understand how in 1 day he went up 3 levels in potion synthesis but could only go up 1 level in two weeks. It's a small complaint that I have a slight tic. I like the story anyway.