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i don't plan to do that
he was getting his ass handed to him with every punch so how can you expect him having fun
well his cultivation level was lower than the other so he should be happy because he won the bet even though it was due to pure luck.
I guess this line has some mistake.
Actually he got too full of himself when his master said that he could win against Ho Chen after using his full power and this is the result
that line is my favourite one as well
thanks i will rectify it
Thanks for the review, I will try my best to improve this.