Not to much of a fan of lex being involved with his mother tho it doesn't seem right lex doesnt suit being involved with his mother a literal angel especially how the archangels are biblical accurate. My reasoning lex during his collage years aren't the same as the current him that is a human trafficking, drug lord, mad scientist and blackmailing. While he may not touch them himself or be present at the deals or transactions he is the one that directs the people under him. I could care less for what u do with Gabriel I'd rather he kinda ask his mom to stay away from him I know Gabriel can probably look at Luthor's soul and judge him that way herself. If the author actually reads this take it with a grain of salt and do or dont reply I'd like to know what u think.

Keep up the good work. But I have one problem with the story when he is attacked by lady Shiva, bullets cant penitrate his skin but a normal blade. He went from being able to withstand bullets to the skin and only coming out with a bruise to being gutted by a knife. Can could u explain this in that chapter or clarify how it did? The rest I have no problem with its explained and logical how it happened.

gotta agree with this it's kinda stupid and the lady Shiva thing is true it could be better but a good read either way.

um not sure if this is a mistake or not but theres no status or anything explaining it unless it's in the next few chapters?

scp 049 has come for scp 113

the names have changed can u fix that since its anoying and confusing.

idk if this is a mistake or not but the names all changed can u have a look at it please.

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yeah something similar to that but instead of using cold hard logic he is still guided by emotions and the base human instincts. He is similar to the cephilons from warframe but the memories aren't fully wiped but it shall be revealed later. Thank you for the feedback.

They removed it on mobile not sure why.

In the comments not chapter comments since I'm posting from phone.

[View from inside hospital]

[Hospital Image] so original image I was going to use is to big going to find a similar one to it sorry

yeah that's true especially when they are lead by the catalyst which is a semi intelligent vi not a full ai. Or is a full ai that doesn't really understand everything or cant think outside its locked logic box.

But it's true ezzo has its limitations I believe the bigger ship you build the more and more ezzo you meet to the point you need more ezzo than the ship has space for. Why use a gun that throws a grain of sand at hypersonic speeds (mach 5) when you could use a railgun that throws things at re-entry speeds (mach 25) impacting you. But it's all upto the person and what they prefer in my case the Terran Ascendancy was in space for millions of years and had technology to build megastructures so they could make tech to do that. But for humanity in ME they were basically lead into a trap by the Reapers and Protheans who had been studying them. And the council taking control of there economy just after the first contact war.

I'm considering it but my main point to leave them in is to show new people that I do listen to your suggestions and am willing to edit any mistakes. But yes I might do it in when I release this weeks chapter.

that is to be explored during me2 and more of the ai backstory

btw how do you comment on the paragraphs?

it's in the comments.