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That was soo bad....
Annoing aivy again..
Perfect thing,but chapters are sooooo shiort man
at first it was interesting to read, even very much, a system with its own innovations and an interesting trick of rewinding time, but ... it quickly turned into something incomprehensible, there was no description at all of the progress of the protagonist, improvement of his abilities, dialogues lasting dozens of chapters, as if I was reading a novel not about the world of shinobi, then interest began to fall and like the cherry on the cake ... in my opinion absolutely useless and completely without the potential of the ability of the mangeku ms, chains? Seriously? the ability to control and create emotions in enemies? ahahah pfft And in the end, I think you can remove the "system" from the tags, since in 40+ chapters it appeared only once, and even then with useless rewards for 3 tasks, nothing else happened, right the author? the result, from a great idea for the system and a good start, slipped to a drop, bb
Author, do you really call this 2 chapters mass release?... -__-
Where are all other bonus chapters???
Whats wrong with endless this chapters? So sad
New chapter???
Trash,drop
No stones, useless chapt sorry