The rasengan was already made by minato at this point in time

sauce?

You seriously thought he would be immediately op? Thats so boring though.

Obligatory author review i hope you guys enjoy my first fanfiction. Power stones are motivation to write faster. So if you want chapters quick you know what to do.

Im tired of people going into the dungeon with no falna, even floor 1 goblins are stronger than humans no way someone with no falna or experience is defeating them SMFH

This "author" is a thief, a snake, and a disgrace this isnt even his fanfiction. He copy pasted this from a novel that was dropped back in 2015.

buncha chink is what they are

Are you chinese?

Bet you also turned off your brai while reading this right?

This is starting to soud a little to wuxia for me kenpachi doesnt speak like that

no its not, this doesnt have anything close to a well built story, with an interesting plot.

How do you find pics like this

I'll just imagine its grigori from dragon's dogma.

What is this a chinese cultivation novel?

Unlike dc marvel characters do what has to be done dc characters are naive idealists

Shut up you chink

what do you expect of the chinks

Im confused, why pick scribe instead of samurai when it does thee same thing but more and better.

There were some parts that made it sound like some of the characters are arrogant young masters, so probably written by a chinese kook.

Can you not type better english?