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Update: the book did not disappoint and the author continues to impress me with the complex plot and nice written smut scenes. Personally I don’t like it if girls are pleasuring each other while doing adult things with the mc(yuri) but this novel doesn’t have such moments so far. I hope the author will keep his high standard and gets the attention he clearly deserves.

This novel is a masterpiece without a doubt. The author managed to create a unique world with beautiful characters. The characters are all reasonable people who acts like „real“ people with brain. There is no one dimensional personality. Everyone has its one reasons and past experiences. The mc is a guy who isn’t hot headed or timid but someone who thinks before he acts. The harem girls are complex characters with beautiful developments. Although you can become pretty annoyed of the constant comparison of the mc with his dad, it becomes acceptable later on. You could argue that some of the girls only sees the mc as a replacement but hopefully the author manages to change it in a beautiful way like how he develops the mc and the side characters.

The story is great with a few flaws which can stop you from reading it further. The world building is nearly perfect with its setting and monsters. The mc and the female characters are well written and are going through nice developments. Although the main cast is good, what can be annoying are the dumb side characters who acts like young masters. Not every side character is like this but the few ones can easily destroy your time. It can be pretty annoying with the fact that some of the opponents act like children who got their favourite toy stolen like dude why. Why are some of them more blind than a blind person? Atleast give them a good reason beside their beloved pride. Overall it’s a good story with some flaws but the good things are more than the bad.

I just reread the first chapters and noticed the changes. The chapters are much more enjoyable to read. I’m sorry for criticising you before, I didn’t know you already edited them. Also do you intend to open a discord server?

The novel is really good and has a interesting concept. It’s a mix from the typical system harem with the own ideas of the author. I like how the mc isn’t just a brainless simp or a dumb wannabe chad. The only thing I found that are a bit off putting are some illogical moments, like at the beginning how the mc family didn’t showed any reaction to his change in appearance. Overall you should give this novel a chance and I hope you will like it like I did. PS: Author keep out the good work!

Because i hope there is none lol

Is there any yuri?

This is a materpiece and honestly deserves more recognition. The characters are well developed, the plot is interesting and keeps getting more interesting. I can’t say more than keep doing what you do author and someday this novel will blow up.

This novel is a hidden gem. I never read a novel who do the reincarnated in a game this way. The heroines are really fun and the mc is fighting for his live. The mc actually uses his knowledge to get powerful without to depend on his system. The system is more like a map that show him hints how to act and doesn’t make him op without instantly. Now to the bad part of the story. The grammar and structure are sometimes really bad. It doesn’t make the story unreadable but it do make it confusing sometimes. The author knows it and is re-editing his novel. It gets better in the later chapters and you can see how the author keeps improving. Maybe the author could think about getting a editor to help him with the grammar. Overall I’m very happy to find this novel and hopefully it gets the recognition it deserves.

One of the best if not the best novel of its kind. The author knows how to make the story feels relatable and likeable. The harem is fun to read and the interactions are very nice. The heroines are strong and independent and do their own thing. The mc is unique and interesting in his own way. The novel is of course not flawless and has its mistakes ( no novel is perfect ). One thing which would improve the overall instantly is to edit the grammar. The novel is readable but sometimes it can get a little bit confusing. I know the author is writing with the help of a translator but maybe someone could edit the old chapters again with its mistakes. At the end a very fun story with interesting interaction between characters and balanced dark and fun moments.