StevenFrost

I don't particularly want my protagonist to suffer that much, just a little hint of pain would do. For the uncomfortable boot situation. I never really thought about that, to be honest. I'll try my best to add more detail in my future chapters next time, though usually, it depends if my mind imagined a much more detailed event. Thanks for this advice btw. I'll keep it in mind.

To be completely honest, I totally forgot how aging works from elves when I wrote that. I just assumed that their aging would be the same as human aging works. I'll keep this knowledge in mind next time.

I'll probably released the next chapter on Thursday or Friday.

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