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yeah , i don't think a person on the verge of panic attack would calm down just like that! talking from experience ..

appreciating the author for not ruining their novel by harem shit 🤍

lol

i don't need any other reason i will read this novel!! thank you for not ruining your novel with a *****ing harem ♥️🫂

is it really that messed up? because if it is then unfortunately im going to drop this wonderful fanfic ( i really like the style and the idea) i love novels with evil mc, but this is just too much also im not looking forward to mc getting married

is he disappointed that he had only 20 people on his first birthday? i had 2 people on my 21st birthday (the 2 people were my parents)😂😂

first of all i love the idea of the story i was really looking forward to a mc in mha fanfic with telekinesis power, good job author! but... let me tell you i love stories with op mc but this is just too much even op characters aren't god like from chapter 2 of the story it just make the story a little bland unless you are going for a story like one punch man also there are little to no dialogues the author doesn't tell the story of how he manipulates or gets friends with deku . So dear author i want to tell you that it's ok to make your mc op but it would be better to make it eventually or start as level 10 then eventually to 100 (if you don't want it to start as level 1) instead of level 100 from the very beginning. another thing is that either keep the original personality of the original characters ( like izuku) or make it clear that they have a different personality from the anime (like izuku being more realistic and be actually mad at bakugo for what he did because I don't think he would so easily befriend mc after he hurts bakugo, cannon izuku is stupid) and the last thing is that, make some actual story not just an explanation of what is happening, dialogues are really important in making the story to feel more real and help the reader to understand and know the mc more! (btw sorry if there is any error in my grammar )