BRJones

Thank you.

Thank you so much for the review. Also thank you for the criticism. On my doc, the paragraphs don't seem that long, due to it being on my laptop. I will definitely take that into account when editing/rewriting the story. To address some of the things you pointed out. The main reason it feels rushed is that I did rush it a bit. This is going to be the first of MANY edits and/or rewrites.

Thank you for the review.

Thank you for the Review.

Thank you for the review.

Cover: 10/10 Simple cover, but grabs the attention of the reader. Synopsis: 10/10 Well worded. Grabs attention. Gives an insight into the novel and main character. BOOK From what I have read so far it is a very interesting book. The phrasing used in the book keep it interesting but also give vivid images to the readers. I found myself pulled into the book. I am not normally one for these types of books, but I found myself holding on to each word and being drawn in deeper to the story and its world. Very well written. 

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