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I would say that, as in most fantasy novels where the characters are physically and magically powerful, having a super memory would be considered the basics, and considering that the mc returned to the past with his brain intact containing his super memory ability from the future , then it would not be strange for him to remember everything in detail. I do not know if you understand me...
idk, i want to see it, but I don't want to spoil either ;(
I always thought that the strong point of JKS is to create interesting stories. Regarding the fighting, it is somewhat disappointing.
Nobody: The Dalki arriving in the middle of the party:
Eno: Give me a hug my dear grandson. Quinn:
So ... just survive until there is a war and after it ends, you go to the battlefield and eat the corpses of the soldiers. EZ
In theory yes, since they do not have organs or muscles. But I imagine that resistance can refer to physical resistance or magic resistance. Who knows...
Alex? :0
No, but I imagine that the sensation feels like a person loses their arm and tries to move it as before. But it can't, why? because it just doesn't have one xd
I was browsing the apocalypse tag and came across this novel. What can I say? The chapter is quite interesting. I like the way it shows the perspective of different people, that finally they all connect in one way, the meteorite! I will add the novel to my library. In addition, I will also comment so that you, author, do not lose heart with this novel. One piece of advice, if over time you get discouraged when you see that your novel doesn't get views, don't worry. The page has an error that does not show the real views. For these to be shown, you need to update the page of your novel constantly and the visits will be updated little by little. With nothing more to add, I look forward to more chapters. PS: If it is not too much trouble, I ask you to stop by my new novel called "The Magical Apocalypse", greetings.
Wise words sir bartender. Give me a drink of vodka to drown the sorrows.
I really can't imagine a woman with a cold personality saying "hello kids." It would be better if you directly say what is coming and nothing more xd
After reading 200 chapters, this is my opinion. The background to the story is good. I like the virus and how closely related the government of the continent is. I will not talk much about the characters since there are not many ... I will only say that it is somewhat annoying that the MC is sometimes cruel and sometimes kind. The grammar. Obviously it is not the best, but I do not have such strict requirements, if you can understand it is enough. The development of the story is meh. There is a lot of filler, every certain chapters he meets people who try to rob him, murder him, kill his pets, etc. Also, the author seems to run out of ideas since he almost always mentions the same information that has been said in previous chapters. I have even seems that the same author gets confused about this and modifies them. Well that. I have nothing else to say. It is a good novel, you can read it if you are bored but nothing more. It's not like you eagerly await chapters every day. PS: Author, I recommend that you avoid using words and jokes from your country. On this page most of the people use English and are native to there. When he tells jokes I don't understand anything since I am from Chile. And that, luck.
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is one rank S!
What can I tell you, author? The story at first is pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is the way you rushed things. As soon as the MC wakes up, he runs through the forest, after running through the forest he meets the road where he gets on the bus that takes him back to the orphanage where the children who intimidate him kill him, why would you go back to the same place where they killed you? unanswered. After arriving at the orphanage, the MC is thrown to a military school in minutes where he is registered and it does not take long before he finds an arrogant boy whom the MC is going to kill in a few more chapters, or even go so far as to say that in the next chapter. In short, author, do not rush the story. Things are going too fast. Not even five chapters passed before the MC who is a cowardly boy turned into a cruel one. Yes, two months passed within the world of history, but for the MC and for us it was a matter of seconds.
Yes! I love these simple but effective systems. I hate when they put terms like "STR.