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This novel keeps the reader on the edge of their seat with its complex characters and gripping plot. The supernatural element adds a unique twist, and the exploration of themes such as revenge and love is thought-provoking. The dynamic between the characters is intriguing and keeps the reader invested until the very end. A must-read for fans of LGBT+ romance and supernatural fiction.

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The story provides an intriguing synopsis, introducing concepts such as Mantras, Bodhisattvas, and superhuman abilities. The character of Kanzaki Hachiro is also given a unique struggle, setting the stage for interesting character development. However, it could benefit from further development and clarification of the world background. Overall, a promising story with potential for compelling plot and characters.

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There is a sense of perseverance and determination shown by the students, as they continue to try and improve despite facing challenges. Overall, the chapter highlights the importance of self-discovery and self-control in achieving success and mastery.

This chapter beautifully portrays the importance and power of harnessing one's spirit and controlling their energy. The master's teachings and the students' determination to learn are truly inspirational. A great lesson to take away from this chapter.

A captivating dark fantasy adventure filled with intrigue and mystery. The concept of gathering the fragments of the Hero's Sword to fulfill a mission given by the Goddess adds an interesting twist to the plot. It appears to be a promising read for fans of fantasy and adventure genres.

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The novel has an intriguing premise and raises many interesting questions. The use of multiple descriptors for the protagonist adds depth to their character. However, the writing could benefit from more concise and flowing sentences. Additionally, more description and world-building could enhance the immersive experience for the reader. Overall, the concept has potential and with some polishing, could make for a gripping and thought-provoking story.

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This story has an intriguing concept and I love the idea of a system that allows you to level up and complete quests in real life. The fast pace and action-packed plot keeps me hooked and I can't wait to see how Matt navigates this chaotic world and discovers the truth behind the system. The fact that the author is updating 2 chapters per day is commendable and shows their dedication to the story. Overall, I highly recommend giving this story a read. Keep up the great work, author!

I highly recommend this book to anyone looking for a captivating and well-crafted read. From the very first page, the author's storytelling skills shine through as they expertly set the stage for an enthralling narrative. The character development is exceptional, with the protagonist being especially relatable and their motives deeply explored. The seamless integration of gods adds another layer of intrigue to the plot, promising to explore themes of divinity and human interaction in unique ways. While the presence of magic is teased, it only adds to the anticipation of what's to come. The tension maintained throughout the book, coupled with the deliberate pacing, keeps the reader fully engaged. Overall, this book is a testament to the author's prowess in storytelling, character development, and thematic exploration. Excellent read!

The plot and concept of having two protagonists in the same game world is intriguing and sets up for an interesting story. The writing style is easy to follow and engaging. However, some more description and development of the characters and world would enhance the reader's connection to the story. Overall, great start to your first novel and I am curious to see where the story goes. Keep writing and seeking feedback to continue improving!