Perishable_Heaven

This is one of those stories that a experienced reader can tell the author put their heart into. While the length of the chapters are on the short side i will say that each chapter carries its own personality. There were one or 2 errors I noticed while reading but it's not the big of a deal, I just tend to over edit my own work, so i tend to pay attention to the placement of every punctuation mark etc. etc. I would like to say this story has some potential down the line as it progresses. Keep up the work Author (^_-)b\

excluding the occasional crazy people laughter

Pretty good pacing, with the story not feeling rushed, and overall really good writing quality. The Pacing is a bit on the slower side so we don't get to see that many sides of the protagonist as of chapter 6 but he seems pretty chill and level headed. His name keep making me think he would turn out to be a vampire thought. keep up the great work!

pretty good so far

Pretty interesting read, the author put a lot of thought and effort into the story and it has a steady progression. In the beginning I was thanking that there would be 2 main characters but fortunately that wasn't the case.

P.S - Just to clarify Fable is not regretting his choice he is more or less shocked at how the one goblin he wasn't paying attention too, abruptly introduced violence to the innocent tribe. *** P.P.S - Just because we see something in the story doesn't mean fable see's it and just because fable experiences something doesn't mean we will experience it. this story in not from Fable's Perspective even though he is the main character. Do you know who's perspective it is?

because nobody else will.

*Sigh* And Creators will always instantly regret everything they have ever created while still showering them in love.