I think this is a translation. i think "to the magic" should be magic resistance.

im only on chapter 23, but you should put quotation marks around sentences so the readers can know when sentences start and end

the harem is going to ruin the story

the name of the novel is misleading.

this is just going to be smut ever single chapter now😒 it was fun while it lasted😮‍💨

this is "Harry Potter and the Homecoming" by BolshevikMuppet99 on fanfiction.net

this is "Delenda Est" by Lord Silvere on fanfiction.net

just put your link at the end of every chapter because putting this every 2 chapters will just turn away readers

it feels like a translation ~~~~~~~~~~~~

reply yes if this is a harem reply no if this is not harem

no, it's not okay. I was telling you why people hated Chinese novels

people badmouth Chinese stories because the translations are mostly trash

please put the harem tag in the tags if you're going the 2 love interests route

yeah I was enjoying that fanfic too but he had to put 2 love interests 😮‍💨

amazing 👏 🤤

PUT THE HAREM TAG IN THE TAGS SO PEOPLE WHO DONT LIKE HAREM DONT WASTE THEIR TIME READING

it was good but then you decided to go the harem route. I'm not going to waste time reading to find out if it will go downhill or not.

it was good but now that its a harem it'll go downhill from here. bye 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

this is a repeat of another paragraph

I saw you liked a comment that said "harem". if it is a harem please put it on the tags for the people who don't like it