Margaret_Rich

Really great novel! I can't wait for it to get picked back, which I hope the author does. Just finished reading it all and loved the direction it was going. I don't want to accidentally put in a spoiler, so I'll leave it at that for this review. I will say that when it does pick back, it seems due for some world building, perhaps alongside the tournament arc competition thing it's entering.

You heard him, Ling Feng. You must investigate. Idk what, but go investigate it.

so first, he gives no second thought to his new parents, doesn't mention his old parents now he completely forgets about the girl he was supposed to be escaping with?

Benjamine sisters?

Great novel love the story mc seems just the tiniest bit too op compared to other characters but it's nice to see he at least gets a bit of competition. can't wait for more chapters to read keep it up author. 👍

I really loved this story but as of around chapter 236 not sure the exact number and don't want to give spoilers. I'll just say that I'm thinking of dropping it now the grammar is way better than I can manage. the world building and storyline is well thought out but the mc seems way more naive and dumb than he should be at this point given the way he was raised and other things I'll keep going for a bit and change this if things change but as of now the first 200 chapters or so are really good but it's kind of fallen off for me.

I vote use her as a double agent and feign ignorance to them. say he knows what they tried to do but he has no proof or just have Alice deal with them.

I mean I was rooting for her to lose I'm a bit petty like that.

my vote is definitely to keep the secretary as I love when her imagination goes wild and I love the dynamic that the mc and Bo Lifen have especially when she drops her guard around him and then gets embarrassed(maybe that's my imagination going wild?XD) either way keep up the good work really enjoy this novel.

late to the party for sure and you probably won't see this but please continue I was enjoying the story very much.