Zealous990

Don’t read. If you get the urge, first read ch 149 to 150 and you will understand to stay enough distance away.

Mc is a beta and a servant at the start so instantly dropped. And he only gets one system at a time. The first is literally an annoying system so I would rather it not exist. Seems generic as well. Mabye it gets better later but if you can’t hook me in then I’m obviously not gonna read through a lot of crappy chapters to get to any good bit.

Yh I might drop. Don’t like his personality. It’s a waste of the power he has.

Yh so this is one of the best novels I’ve read in quite a bit. Amazing story, and I quite enjoy the fact that it is quite balanced interms of genres. Nice relationship development with alecia and I enjoy the fact that the mc is op and smart as well. Only criticism I have is that I feel like the story is too slow paced. Though I absolutely enjoy the detail that you’ve put into it.

Obviously. Why do we care otherwise.

Mc is pathetic icl. I can’t be asked to read something when I don’t care about the main character. Who tf spares the person who kidnapped and brutally assaulted him and takes her to hospital. Like are you that weak minded??

Do not read if you want an evil mc or a smart mc or even an op mc. The tags are misleading and need to have weak mc, face slapping, pushover, stupid mc and dual personalities as well. If these tags don’t exist then I want a warning in the description.

Nah I’m actually annoyed at the mc. He is too stooped. I quit.

Mc is insufferable, can stand him but the story/ plot and the world background looks good so far. Only 70 chapters in but I hope you merged them together or killed the idiot cause I will quit otherwise.

Hey guys, hope you are well. I am a new author and so any feedback you could give me is much appreciated. This can also include ideas for the story moving forwards as well. Also what do you think of the beginning of the novel so far?