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The idea is so unique I like the plot summary I’ll give it a try hopes it’s as as sizing as it sound and Good luck

Or even a spin off novel with an main character living inside Rowan’s universe would be great juat a auggesting if you have time . Like imagine waking up and finding out your whole dimension is alive or that the rich environmental energy in our world make his:her universe one of the most powerful or ecen reaction of people accidentjy discovering Rowan’s dimension and it’s uniqueness. By the way question where is the entrance to his dimension located is it physically om his body or just a gate portal place somewhere same in the universe? Can he know if someone unauthorized visit .

I’m dying to know what happened to Rowan’s sisters and brothers the last update is when he stored their bodies in the space with the primordial eye of time and evil. Were they destroyed on doom star world or is he storing them, is a he planning to resurrect them ? Did he bring them back to life with the rest of trion? I would really like to see that storyline of his interaction with his siblings or how they would have looked like without the influence of the primordial shadows. Please author if you have time solve this plot line. And we haven’t gotten an update on Rowan’s dimension for a while like what is the faction now? How many supreme, mid or minor worlds dose he has , what are the current different species he’s housing, how is is his dimension functioning is it connect to other universe like can inhibitants juat leave like other universe, dose anyone from the outside ever visit his dimension and found out how unique it is? We never get to interact with Rowan’s planets or creation unless it’s his children who only show up to fight nothing really known about the daily life inside his dismnsion. I think if you have time can you re add back the little kingdom building aspect to the story please 🙏 .

This story is a fucking heap of crao with no plot and no structure the character, storyline, and concept change every 20 chapters. I swear who gave the author the confidence to post this shit, you skip storylines without explanation. Change mad delete characters like a game. So guys do not read its waste of time. The masked ruler went from a gos entity, to a coquerer king and the last chapters rgeaun character dissipates without any mentions or reason why this is shit author I pray you never write again because it would be a curse to fellow readers eyesight. I’m so upset the way rge author writes without any care for his readers no explanations it’s like he’s saying take it or leave it . I hope you get banned

What is the fivking plot of the story it’s so damn random. 😤 This makes want to curse the author is this on purpose or am I not seeing something what did I miss? I let go the when the masked ruler sunddenly appeared and became a king, but he disappears agin and our other characters juat became stragglers with one city what about all the land they conquered? Kmt

Where did the masked one Go? Did he just suddenly disappear ? Who are all these new characters ? Wasn’t iron hold suppose to be the capital ? So confuse. Is it a mistake or juat horrible writing ?

You even made him think of all the plans what’s the point of the strategist? At this point I’ll just turn off my brain because the way this moves from a fantasy type kingdom building to juat war,blood and steel kingdom building given no explanation it’s like we skipped dozen of chapter between the Stone Age and mideval age arcs

Like what the hall when did he become visible? Where is the system ? So confusing

Exactly bro the story is full of so much loopholes like when sue the masked ruler moved from a God figure to a leased of rge civilization appearing on earth? What was the point of choosing an leader? How did other tribes get made I though there was only one ? Why did the masked ruler exclude all other people on the planet juat did a group of people ? Wasn’t all the intelligent beings made by him isnt it stupid to only support one group of people of the hundreds, and what was the point of choosing a intelligence base powered civilization if he was gonna give them every information leading them by the nose? How did dude went from granting knowledge to making whole buildings and lands appear out of thin air? It’s like first the dude wws a god like figure guiding from the shadows but then became a mortal king and the whole reason for intelligence species went to shit because he thinks for them.

Wasn’t the masked ruler in heaven how did he come down to earth isn’t he suppose to be a god figure and what about leaving the people to learn wasn’t that whole reason he pick intelligence for his people and why dose he talk like the test if the people om the planet isnt his own were their people before he created rge first group? There are so many plot holes