Anphire

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Hi! Words of encouragement and smiles of appreciation from me to the author. For other readers, so far what I’ve read it’s a definite recommend. Writing Quality: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Note: There are curse words, but it’s only in dialogue I think. Dialogue is pretty nice. Like the bolded words, definitely some quotables. Flow between scene to scene and plot is good. It builds the character backstory before we get into blue lock, which means you don’t need to know about blue lock to read the first few chapters. Good suspense, dialogue, and conflicts. Updating Stability: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ I personally have no clue if this is actually five stars for updates since I just read and finished this yesterday and then decided why not let’s write a review. But as of now there’s around 16 chapters + 1 that may be deleted/locked soon. Story Development: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Pacing is good and introduction to characters are realistic and relatable enough. The plot flows together and pretty engaging read in my opinion. Character Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Characters are good. Realistic and understandable. Some can be considered plot devices, but they all seem to have a life and memory in them. world background: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (idk why but when I’m writing the review world background isn’t capitalized like the other sections so I’m copying the formatting) The fanfics world is Blue Lock, mainly focused on soccer/football (the black and white one hexagon pentagon ball one) (It’s a good manga and I think anime thou I only read the manga around last year and wanted to see if anybody made their own spin-off but there wasn’t, but now there’s a few :D) Protagonist is nicely integrated into Blue Lock world. I’ll come back again :D Also I just realized there’s emojis that I haven’t used before so:

I disappeared from webnovel because of some weirdness on the app on my side and came back to check out some novels to see if they updated. Not sure whether to download the app again though. Prob will a few years later when I have a lot of free time. Will check out your novel one of these days (thou I don’t have a wattpad account so can’t comment) :D

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eh? be nice to the brother XD

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Nah :)

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