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maelvoid_202521hComentado porThe dark world was the last actually decent if not good stand alone Thor movie. Everything following has been trash.
"Isn't it true? They botched Civil War, ruined Doctor Strange, threw in Captain Marvel for no reason just to mess things up even more. And don't get me started on that Thor fiasco!"- maelvoid_20254drespondió a king_of_kings666
remember he was around that age when he transmigrated there.
A subtle feeling stirred within Kyle as he touched the cheek that had received an unexpected kiss but he swiftly brushed aside these thoughts. - maelvoid_20254dComentado por
So the author seems to have made a mistake here. when they talk about his achievements they werent gained in 10 days, but instead over serveral months. Remember he was the cream of the crop at his base and ended up becoming a legend with rumors spreading about a rookie recuite. Note that steve also left eight months ago one for when he was traing and preparing for the experiment and the others for post experiment retraing. Also mc left the base after 1 more month training so... the actually length of time it took has been a couple of months. The author just sucks at keeping track the times he stated which make it sound like omplete bs.
Ch 20 IMUC-CHAPTER 20: LEAPING THROUGH RANKS - maelvoid_202510dComentado por
Although I don't write, personally I think this whole build up could have been done better. The Mc seems lacking in actually character development for example personality wise he seems stuck up, with no feelings towards others and mean he tries to come up with an excuse for his lack of empathy toelwards curses. He doesn't really communicate nor go out out of his way to actually get to know his class mates. The pacing is also going way to fast, he lacked proper motivation from day one. He hasn't really contemplated his end goal. Outside of all this and some other things the story is fine, just take your time to develop the story. Don't worry about keeping it honed towards a certain direction and consider the possible butterfly affects his action will have on others and the world.
Ch 31 Chapter 31 - maelvoid_202513dComentado por
yeah thats also what was stated during their meeting
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Overall it is a great story with little to no grammatical mistakes. However, the pov of Cane is boring. He's too perfect with no actual flaws which hampers the story in the long run. It would have been much more interesting actual watching him climb the latter towards being an overlord while building his empire. Theirs also the relationship development area...it's kinda lacking especially when hes first introduced into the story. The jabs he thrown at lucifer were unnecessary and overplayed. In general he is a gary sue type character.... Though this is just my opinion after reading it.
- maelvoid_202530drespondió a beigehawk
I think hes getting them its just to many to actually keep count of while also continuing the story right now. If I had to give a guess of how many probably enough to improve all his skills by a level or two with like 20 mistakes each.
Ch 2423 The Holy Emperor Closes the Door (4) - maelvoid_20251mthComentado porCh 2370 The Jade Scroll Provokes Murderous Intent (2)
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congratulations 🎊
Good news is, I graduated, so I will have more time to do this, so that's cool. - maelvoid_20252mthrespondió a Noire_LiliumAt least there was some good eye candy to be had with them. Robin was too young for her tastes but that green shapeshifter boy was kind of cute in a goofy way. And the cyborg guy was just one big hubba hubba hunk of man and metal~!
- maelvoid_20252mthrespondió a Man_of_culture_69Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Ryan
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Yeah...No agree to disagree.
'Fun' like its many colorful villains and heroes. Some of them could even put up a good fight. His siblings, obviously. Even if they could be trying and tiresome. But Damian had been surprised when he found that Harley Quinn in particular showed herself as a worthy opponent for him to test himself against. It almost made being restricted by Father's rules worth it. Almost. - maelvoid_20252mthComentado porCh 41 INTERLUDE 5: The Witcher Returns to Night City
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Technically they arent fictional, there all real. It's just that the people who get a glimpse of said reality while in their own reality perceive it to be a dream of their own creation.
In the same line of thought, there were Sean's claims of what and where each of those lives were. At least there, Clark understood parallel worlds and knew them to be real. But knowing they were real wasn't the same thing as learning that many of them were fictional and that there were entire other multiverses outside of their own. - maelvoid_20252mthComentado porCh 31 30: LIVE at the Dead End!
- maelvoid_20252mthrespondió a Yukio_Sama
Your right because the orginal author said that females in that race don't exist and King cold had him al alone. This means that they are both male and female.
"I can remember my mother and father sending me off to this planet, not to conquer it, but to be safe from the man that conquered even the saiyan race, and I can remember the older brother who excitedly chattered to me about how his power had grown to over give hundred and how he would make sure to train me up to be strong just like him so we could go on all the exciting missions together." I let that hang in the air for a moment, "My parents are dead. My brother killed by near enough my own hands because of the original, and on top of that, the original, pitifully weak minded as he is, stomped our grandfather to death because he forgot who he was and couldn't control himself as an Oozaru." - maelvoid_20252mthComentado por
B.S it was the other way around Zaraki was the one who unconsciously lowered their strength as he was in awe of the first kenpachi's strength. He never wanted the battle to end, but Captain unahonna couldn't keep up, though she won in the end she understood that infact she was not Zaraki's opponent. The conclusion of the battled allowed her to realize what had happened. This caused her to feel as though she had committed an forgivable sin, which is the self imposed restrictions of Zaraki.
In order to continue fighting with that child, Retsu Unohana followed Tenjirou Kirinji and learned the healing techniques of Kaido. For so many years, she had always wanted to find someone to test whether she now had the strength to make that child fight at full power.