samiullah_Arif

i am going to be greedy and say u do both,your work is 🤩

the chapters are mixed up and are not in orderly fashion

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at first the writing was average but it has now improved significantly.well done✅

an excellent Star , with unique concept

many grammatical mistakes , translation not so good,but it is readable

he means Dou di , since xiao yan was called as flame emperor when he achieved dou di , same with hun tiandi with the soul emperor.