Lemonbunzz

Goddess of Magic should literally be her official title.

YEHHH TELL HER

WHAT THE-

Not the latest free chap tho. see ya until then.

too many cliches happening in one chapter. 💀

Why is he arrogant when he's obviously weak? Literally only plot armor can save you 💀💀

It's a good one, it's still up to the user if it's gonna be dangerous.

Just an early chapters review I really have a mixed feelings about this novel. I mean it's got some potential to be good. You got no grammatical mistakes and it's easy to read. but there's so many things that just really ticks me off. I might change this review as I read more. I feel like the author trying to show something especially the characters but fails just to do so. for example, the author appears to try showing that the mc is matured due to his nature of his reincarnation,perhaps like most other novels of it's type. This is obviously implied the way character say it and obviously his some of his actions. However, on the other side, he is naive and a very childish at times, which is the exact opposite, at least in the early chapters. I hope you get what I mean. The worldbuilding appears really plain, uncreative and there really nothing else to it other than it's a typical medieval-fantasy world with magic, goblins, giant monsters, dragons and pretty much what you would see in the normal fantasy world. It's got no unique monsters, sentient races are the same ol' fairies, elves, humans, dwarves(?). All in all, there's nothing to it. in fact, most the plants and crops are just mundane ones from Earth. Add more to it!! Look at Harry Potter, for example, it's got boggarts, bowtruckles, and nifflers and unique magical plants!! And heck even a dodo bird is actually a magical creature. Your world? (this novel's) we've seen a lot of those and it's boring now. bruhhhhh.... I'm just ranting at this point...It's fantasy novel!.. 😭😭😭 But at least your not bad at showcasing the plain fantasy world. I'm not talking about character development since it's gonna be very long. Other review, mentioned it anyways. The romance aspect in this game is also a very lacking, it really has a great potential but there's nothing literally to really comment on it as it's mostly non-existent in the novel despite the title made it clear that romance would be significant in this story. I feel like it COULD attract romance fans (and only) because of the TITLE but won't be able to retain their loyalty and attention. Anyway, there are so much more to say but I'm tired now. There's a lot of missed opportunities to capture attention and show creativity. Unfortunately, majority are just summarized and scenes that could've been written in a lot more chapters were narrowed down to just a single chapter and even just a few lines. I can guess that there aren't a lot of readers. And author, I hope you don't get mad at this review and you don't mind constructive criticism.

except the Enemy characters.. probably

They way I see it though, this is 'that' type of novel where deaths and casualties will be very rare, if not completely non-existent. It's where the author is trying to avoid even the most minor character and cannon fodders from death. But I'm not sure yet.