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A Self Entitled Piece of Shit.
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I Love this story but the last 3 chapters were of no use as the info dump had no effect on the story as a whole it would have been better if you had just made it into a few paragraphs instead of 3 whole chapters as I skipped the chapters and had no discrepancies with the story going forward.
not that I'm going to drop it, it just lazy writing to me.
I always see this excuse with gender ends stories and it's annoying.
i Love this story but the plot line it jumps all over the place.
this was actually my first decision game I have ever played. after completing it I bought the others.
it's fine I honestly didn't notice the change in his attitude.
what was the point in asking us if we would like Fiona in the harem if you just disregard the poll in the first place.
if he's going to get a new body what is the point of calling him Linus if he's just going to get new names like with anakim.
no thanks, Shrek deserves love.
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oh you really don't know how to end chapters without cliffhangers.. huh.
please don't bring Niko into this, he just wanted out of the criminal scene.
see you do this every chapter.
it would have be more effective if you didn't do this with every chapter so I was expecting this to happen.
in all honesty i think he should give Lester bit of the code from the profiler, only the bit that makes faces blurry I think he deserves it, and if you want to give him a bit more I don't mind.
this one is great. please continue.
+1 i honestly don't care but it would be funny.