Lazy_Emporer

Greetings Author, it has been a while since your last chapter. However, you still provide a good quality chapter. For that, I thank you.

Can't find patreon page.

Prioritise your safety and well-being first Author. We are thankful for your dedication, but you need to be safe as well as healthy first and foremost.

Hey Author, so the first thing that comes to mind is that you need to strengthen your understanding of commas and other punctuation marks. Second, is that you make nearly each paragraph a single sentence. Thirdly, there are also misspellings. It isn't a huge problem but it can be annoying when having to correct it when reading. I suggest that you work on your sentence structuring, punctuation marks and capitalizing the "I". That was for your sentences. For the story, it is good. Just read your chapter by yourself before posting so that you can correct your mistakes if there are any. Overall: The direction of the story is good but give a little more detail with a better description. Your sentences are good, but they can become better with just a bit of practice.

Sure. Though I am going to do it in the morning. It's nearly 6 pm by me and it's dark.

Agreed. Author - if you are reading this - can you have her fail in her duty and then have her burnt by Phosphex?

The Phalanx is sometimes described as being almost like a hive city. If that is the case then the population can be between 10 and 100 billion people.

Demon Slayer.