Simeon_Classic

thanks for the advice!! : )

all and all a wild read mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i feel as if the 9 chapter skip some details within the our years after he left but all and all still a good read.

So far i liked the story but it help you made the story slow down. How about adding more dialogue. Maybe describe the second character more. and maybe use ( when i got to school) instead of " fast forward to school" all and all i think this story is not a bad start.

follow the story is kinda hard but i can't stop read it. something about this story caught my attention `(^_^)'

i love that the cute MC is shy and has hot dudes claiming him!

Waking up in a red velvet room, wow I know something hot is going to happen! ^_^