Justin_Bailey_7636

it's a good fanfic , the pacing of the story is satisfying without overwhelming you and still keeps your imagination and attention on the story, character interactions are good as well their personality are fairly easy to tell which makes you more invested in how that might continue or change further in the story one critic I have doesn't have to do with the story itself but that past chapter 10 some of the chapters got uploaded out of order and that got pretty jarring because I was so immersed in the story I didn't notice until after he went back to Salazar portrait and learned about the time turner so if you could please fixe the order of the chapters that are wrong it would make for a better reading experience for me and others and some people won't stop reading just so they don't have make sure they are reading in the correct chapter past 10 and thank you for taking the time to read this don't know when or if you will read this so 😀😊 MARRY Christmas 👍

hope your mom stays well and u stay out of jail and stay healthy missed your stories glad your back 😊

would actually be atleast a decent read to just turn your brain off enjoy if the names were translated correctly can't focus on the story, world background or the writing quality of the story because I have to fry my brain to figure out the name of the character, pokemon moves , items, etc

pretty good I like the pacing of the story so far can't wait for the 5th chapter onward to see how it develops from here 😀

I love the steady and realistic character/power growth of the Mc and his pokemon, also and the in depth level of background development done threwout the story and it's all ways timed perfectly so it doesn't disturb the flow of the story.