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The story has a lot of potential, but the pacing feels off. The balance just isn’t there yet. Everything feels a bit too chaotic, and the mission is way too difficult for the characters at this point. I’m all for challenges, but it feels like the stakes are too high too soon, without enough buildup or character development. The MC should have developed slowly with satan seed, but instead, he exploded with power and became OP in one chapter. It’s hard to get invested when things move this quickly. Of course, if it was me, I would have destroyed the whole universe and rebuilt it in my image from the start.
Are you serious?! The MC had a Satan Seed, not some instant universe-breaking power, right? So why rush it now? You just skipped all the tension and growth! And the multiversal chat group hasn’t even started yet—what’s the point if the MC’s potential is already maxed out? This is such a missed opportunity. Slow it down, let the Seed develop naturally, and actually make the story mean something. Fix this, author, or I’ll make sure every time you try to write, your cursor will just blink at you in judgment!
You said it yourself, Planet Vegeta has 10x Earth's gravity, what are you talking about? If mc uses only 3x Earth's gravity for training that would only make him weaker.
So what's his current bounty? 🤨
Mc used observation haki, he doesn't have a devil fruit
Prosperity fruit 😂😂😂
Flourish flourish fruit is most probably a mistranslation.