David_Whitmore

Excellent!

Wow! This is by far the best novel here. I am exceedingly happy, but I would be even happier if I could figure out to put it in my Library. To the Author: Please keep goingn you are a terrific story teller.

This Conference allows one to discuss incredibly difficult social and ethical questions.

This has an excellent story-line. The main character is flawed, and is both aware of his flaws and accepting of them. The society in which he lives is well described and stable; the Laws, as well as the inter-personal relationships with characters around him. As for the author's writing, I have learned to accept the grammatical errors due to the probability the English is not their first language; my belief is that the author is dependent upon using translation software, either prior to or upon posting this novel on the website. Once I came to that conclusion, I found it much easier to read this excellent story. To the author: Thank you for your hard work and diligence. Please keep writing as you have a wondrously creative mind. On a side note; I'm a cyborg myself. Not to the degree your characters are, but I do have electronic devices implanted in my body, along my spine, to aid in controlling my movements while reducing pain levels from bodily damage. Have yourself a great day!

Excellent! You managed to overwhelm the character's inate and societal biases. Good job!

Thank you for writing this book. I enjoyed it immensely. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Hmm... I'm wondering if early Mohammed Ali was an inspiration here. Maybe the mixing of this 'Boxer' with the 'Maid'?

Excellent plot twist! And yet another example of humankind's ability to pervert Personal Protection Equipment into an offensive weapon for mere greed.

Test pilots are known to push systems to their limits... To determine what exactly those limits are. It's their job! Salma did her job.

Aww... Bias? Females have been historically proven to be both sronger and to have better reflexes than a comparably sized male. Social nuances aside.