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wassup ya pieces of shit this is my man cave, also I write shit for fun since I'm bored AF
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I was more partial to using parentheses back then since it was easier to type on a keyboard instead of just using "."
And I never will! God can't make me pay my taxes, and no one will make me change my writing style! Although, I curse a lot as well, and most of the time I imagine the bastard that is Frank to be freely cursing as he wishes. That, and there are far too many scenarios and situations that I slap him into that he just can't help but speak the tongue of sailors.
Fair fair bruv. Not gonna lie, had no real plans for the first couple chaps. Decided, fuck it, might as well see how bad I can make this and how desperate some of the readers can be. I guess that might be the reason why one of the parts in the synopsis is that you're gonna regret reading it. Which is definitely a common thing I see in a lot of people reading it.
Alright, to be serious now, you aren't wrong about it being inherently non-satirical, predominantly due to the fact that it started out as something that I did mainly because I wanted to. But now it's slightly less satirical and relatively a regular cancer and crack fic, because I realized that it would have changed eventually. Though to be fair you rated it from the earlier chapters, which was still in the first world, and it was quite literally a work that I had no real plans for aside from writing what I pleased. So fair fair on the unpleasant views for the first hundred chappies, but does it get better? That's subjective, you'd only really know once you see it yourself.
Disregard the note. I'm far too busy with paperwork and projects to do that. Sometimes the count will be 3K or 2.5K, dependent on whether or not I feel like it's satisfying to me. Smash that like button and go smash your crush. With a jackhammer.
oh you bellend, and it was getting good
Alright, once again, another review, and this time round, oh my god, the quality on this baby. First and foremost, the quality, oh Lord above, help me with this one, because YES. It's a damn good one, little to no real issues when it comes to the quality. I cannot stand grammar errors nowadays, so this is more than a happy me. Second, the story. It's quite simple, a goblin that hates his own race because he's a mama's boy. It may sound odd, but that's because it's more or less a simplification of what is going on within it. Meets GS in his very first few weeks of his life, and becomes an apprentice of sorts. Character design-wise, he's a blank slate, just filled with hatred for his own species, love for his mother, and what I could almost taste as a growing respect for GS. The update stability, oh boy, here's my gripe. I'm already quite impressed with the rest of this, but the amount of chapters so far has me screaming and clawing at the gates of hell of more. World-wise, it's a simple Goblin Slayer world, with your simple Goblin Slayer track and plot. Overall, I give it a solid 4 outta 5. I get that the wordsmith really wants to pump more of this still out, and I will be waiting for it.
Sheo would be proud
Well, I suppose I have to dip my hand into the barrel, once again. Truth be told this fic isn't bad in the sense that it's unbelievable, well, at least most of the times, but it still proves to be making you feel dissatisfied. For starters, God forbid that there would be a correct "I'm", no no no, it's always im, simplistic little issue to mitigate, just a single tap of autocorrect away, but no, it's not fixed. This is the first of the gripes I have. For the story, fast-paced, understandably he's a deity, time flies when you live for eternity til you've lost the faith of the people. But by God, if you truly wished to give respect to Bryant, you could have made it a bit more seamless, instead of outright making Ares look like a schizoid. The constant issue of pointing out references, by yourself if I may be frank, is kind of a quality drop. We understand you've slapped them in cuz haha it's funny. The character. Oh the character. I get it, he's supposed to be the cool, murder guy that doesn't give much of a shit and gets the gains all ez, no cap or whatever the fuck the new people say, and I understand, the newer novels nowadays are all femboys or fekkin manhwa MC copy-pastes. And I get why he didn't want to be getting so close to Aphrodite, she's the etymological origin for so many fucking fetishes that it's just painful to watch. But again, if they noticed that he was acting a bit more peculiar than normal, they would question his gifts of divinity, wondering if he was misplaced by the fates for something different. The update stability is possibly the only redeeming factor, being often enough that it wouldn't be a hassle to write and give quality, while allowing you to have enough time to think for yourself, good on you for taking care of yourself wordsmith. And the background, there's much to be said, but it can be summarized cleanly. It's mediocre, oftentimes rather a droll experience. We've had this song and dance before, and mish-mashing a bunch of titles and people doesn't innately increase the quality of what you're making. It's almost the same issue with harems and all that song and jazz. Too many people, and too little quality. Overall, 3.2 out of 5.0, this is a major fixer-upper of a fic. This is off my chest and out of my say now. Have a decent day, wordsmith.