jonknowsnothing

Didn't he have four goals, *then* score a hat trick? He should have 8, at least. I think?

Would he sound like a girl, just like Yoruichi sounds like a guy?

Almost 30 chapters in and I don't think we've gotten a single physical description beyond the MC being male.

Would be fine if it were less over-the-top AI-ish. The base design is fine, just filtered to look like its trying way too hard to be cool.

You're writing a RI story and don't even have the vital gu planed yet?

I mean... "a lot of effort"? Issho accepted within, like, a minutes or two of talking about it.

Not first mate?

Also, saying he's over 2m tall, really, really isn't the flex you think it is in one piece.

All the rejections track though in-universe.