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crinix6mthComentado porignite ???
He had actually transmigrated, and it was a soul transmigration with the same name and surname? What a lack of creativity! No wonder he couldn't ignite himself!- crinix7mthComentado por
wasn't he was son of train conductor ?
Kyle Marshall was only thirteen years old and was previously earning money by helping his father's friend, a watchmaker working at the alleys of Melthorn City. - crinix8mthPublicado por
It's a great fanfic...but i think Author wasted a lot potential by rushing the plot.Side character are not really they just in background for one or two dialogue...like literally I don't remember the name of MC sister because she doesn't really have a role in fanfic aside from just being there...just like the Cursed hammer he got at early stages i also don't remember much about him because Author is rushing the writing.It has become boring and predictable...i think Author is going with the theme of MC doing all the things and making things alright for people and in the End he will become Ultimate God and will live happily after.Basically its a fix it type fanfic.
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DC has it much worse with clone
For some reason, I have been feeling like that lately and I don't know why. But intellectually speaking, just why? Why the fixation on clones and mutant experiments in Marvel? - crinix11mthComentado por
May God bless him with good health
[A/N Current Time: Just on Monday, my Father had a major heart attack, he's fine, but I'll be having to keep an eye on him whenever I'm not working, so don't expect large chapters, at least not next week, here's the chapter early, I typically post it at 10 PM] - crinix11mthComentado por
thus*
Now, he no longer had a Battle Soul that could kill the bizarre spirit. Then, he could only extract everyone's power and condense it on one person. - crinix1yrComentado por
And that's how my hero academia was born
The concept of heroism expanded to encompass not only those who fought crime but those who used their powers to uplift humanity in various ways as well. After all, as a wise man once said, not all heroes wear capes. - crinix1yrComentado por
marking*
At this moment, another sword began to rise as this was white gold in color, making the fall of yet another being who followed this austere Lineage of the Sword. - crinix1yrComentado por<I am Loot. You are Loot. So just…become loot>
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Hope*?????
"Why are you here? I don't remember ever hearing the Avengers ever conducting an interrogation on civilians." Hank Pym said as he relaxed into his chair while Rose and Scott appeared tense. - crinix1yrComentado por
what about the eyes??
<The Sub-construct of the Infinite Forge has been transformed into the Aeonic Forge of Extremity.> - crinix1yrPublicado por
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what?
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - crinix1yrComentado por
end* why are there so many mistakes in this chapter ?
"Feel free to find out, but I doubt it would and well for you, mother..." Etrigan said, causing the creature to pause and turn back to him, seemingly confused. "The Mortal before you defeated archduke Asmodeus and almost slew him in battle..." He added, and his mother's expression changed with every word he spoke. - crinix1yrComentado porCh 78 Fiery Friend
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he's becoming aware of fourth wall
"If you are the Extra that's currently dying, then naturally…I am the Main Character." - crinix1yrComentado por
if he can teleport then why the hell is he still there, he should just go home
Frowning, I equipped my Starheat ring and phased through the attack, activating my phantom belt and disappearing in the air. Activating the Motherbox, I teleported behind the demon's back and swung my axe at his neck.