Arctic_Hourglass

Hmm, tasty eggs.

I don't feel like that's the right thing to say. Although I understand what he means, doesn't that make it sound like he just killed someone who could be innocent to the faction?

Something like this?

So a dragon is only a legendary tier beast, hmm

Oh? How do you think it got there?

Hmm, does it say how to cat h a vampire?

I'll look into it, but have you read this book yet? I'm just curious if I'm the only one who thinks its moving a little slow

summoning them to his palm.

Angry dude

First chapter needs to be edited a bit, and I couldn't really get a feel for the book yet. It also seemed a bit fast, but that might just be me. Maybe after the next chapter it will pick up. Either way, at least the grammar was good.