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You have excellent grammar and have very creative ideas for your book's world and characters. Keep it up author. You're doing quite well so far. [img=recommend]
You have excellent grammar and your story has a good storyline. Please continue with your novel since it will be interesting to see how your main characters develop. [img=recommend]
Please capitalize H of the word "hey"...
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Thank you for your feedback. It means so much for someone who had a stroke like i have. XD
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Very good use of the English lhere, Author. Also, your story has a very good start. I was just a little confused about your female MC's name... Is it Marilene or Isabella?[img=faceslap]
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Thank you for your feedback. It means so much to a stroke victim like me. 🤗
I observed that you have greatly improved in your storytelling skills in this story. However, please find time to go back through your story and improve on your punctuation marks and capitalization uses. [img=recommend]