Prithvi_Sankar

I love the story and how it's going. My only back is that Atticus is so OP that he doesn't have competition anymore. Maybe this will change when he meets the other true willers

Hey Author, I think the story is moving in a perfect pace. But send us more chapters

I regret buying the privilege. it's gonna end up being a waste of money

Hey so after commenting on the ruined heir. I thought I'd give my honest feedback on AO. AO used to be my favourite like I'd be desperate for new chapters, I mean I still am but not as much as I used to. These days it feels like there's way too much repetition. I feel it's kind of going like Dragon Ball Z, MC keeps fighting to protect his close one, new powerful enemies and new power ups. I understand at the end it's about finding and killing the guy who reincarnated him but it feels like the story is being dragged. I don't know if there's a secret plot that connects all but do we need to go through a 1000 enemies before seeing a hint on the plot? Initially I loved the character growth from birth, the training camp, academy and then the first intro on where he stands compared to the other Apex but after the Apex competition it's like his power up is beyond ridiculous, it's nice but ridiculous. Overall I don't know why but compared to the initial days it's slightly disappointing. The only reason I am saying this is because AO and Ruined heir are the only 2 novels I'm reading right now. I used to read a lot previously and most have ended and I am planning having these 2 as my last before I stop. I see a lot of potential and compared to all the novels I've read these are in my top 5. So I want this to be the best of the best FYI some of my fav are 1. Supremacy games 2. A will eternal 3. Second coming of gluttony 4. My vampire system 5. Shadow slave

I love this novel so far. The fights are highly technical and you show the complex thought process of the MC during the fight, which is both a plus and minus. It's a plus because it's not just some super genius fighting using instincts. It's a minus because that makes it kind of a drag. I am not a expert writer so I don't know if what I am about to say will be helpful or not but if you first maybe show the fight with the opponents POV and then show the MC's POV on the fight, it maybe slightly better. Don't take what I am saying seriously it's just a thought it may or may not be better at the end.

Whisker von pounce is the new star of the series

Return of the crazy demon

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